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题目：

Some people say that it is not right for the government to spend so much money on artistic project, such as galleries and sculptures. Do you agree or disagree with them?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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沪友A的作文：

A poet once said, if Centuries of human civilization are completely destroyed, the most important lose is the fall of human arts during the time. Art is the most refined expression of human experience and sensibility. I sometimes imagine that if human being annihilate like the dinosaurs, what is the heritage for the next living civilization? I thought the main heritage is our art.

We, as human beings, all have sensibility sensibilities and thoughts. Many of us express ourselves to record our life by the records happened in our life. And art is art because it's the best expression or most precise record among all these productions. While the true art not only express the author himself, but also express something many others may share but also many other sharing can be expressed. At In this point, the true art is also the expression and records of our own exsit  exist. That's why we should cherish them, and this is the main reason I support the goverment government to invest on art, which is the unique human property.

Secondly, with the process of globalization, cultures of different counties become more and more homogeneous. It is fasion fashionable for the government to protect its own culture by investing on the regional or traditional art, because the distinct character of one region is best represented by the regional art. Sometimes, artworks are considered to be the symbol of a city or and a country.

Admittedly, it is of great importance to protect the artworks as human heritage, but it also should be taken into consideration that there are other forces takeing which take part in this activity. Since the nineteenth century, many famous art foundations, private museums, large cooperation are engaged in collecting and preserving artworks. As a result, the government may not take the whole task as its financial burden.

In conclusion, preservation for artworks is an important duty for the government. At the same time, since there are other social powers taking part in this affair, the expense may be shared according to the concrete situation.

沪友B的作文：

Recently, increasing cities and areas began to concern on the artistic projects such as galleries and sculptures: a large number of sculptures presented present the spirit of the community had been set up in the centre of the city; there are dozens of museums are opening with large input without but less visitors and there are massive galleries appeared appearing in on the streets and roads whose purpose is to promote the grade and quality. However, I tend to agree that governments should spend money for on basic needs.

Throughout the world, there are millions and millions of people there are millions of people who are homeless and need aids relieved from government. If the government has so much money to spend on artistic project has spent too much money on …, they should easily be able to have enough money to help these people gain entry to the working world. For example, the government could spend money on free trains for jobs and help them to find approaches to feed up survive on themselves.

Pollution is another major problem which plagues all of the industrial nations. Instead of spending money on other planets, we should be focusing on how to fix the one we live on这里可使用被动语句更好. The ozone layer is getting thinner and thinner every year, which means that the sun’s radiation is causing more damages to people and the environments. A healthy environment has served as inspiration to artists over the centuries and millennia millennium. On all continents creative people have drawn from the positive effects of natural beauty to produce artistic project. The governments need to design a method to drastically reduce pollution, or else, we might change into artistic projects of the earth one day.

In conclusion, while the artistic project ell an outsider much about what the people of the place value culturally, I consist that governments spend too much money on it, when they should be focusing focus on the needs of people living nearby.

沪友C的作文：

To catching catch good quality in peoples' life is more and more people to consciousness  reaching to a high standard of life quality is concerned by more and more people The life, including foods, garments, housees, traiffty? Etc不要用缩写. In During these years, Artistic life is coming into a plenty of peoples' life and the government also attach importance to it at the same time,. They spent the money on artistic projects, some persons said the government do前后时态要一致 not spend so much mondy money on artistic project. At In my mind, the government need  spending  the money on artistic projects, but not much money, Reasonable as below. Tks!

The art galleries and sculptures had get got the people enjoyed make sb do sth their life 最好用一般现在时 and it is also trimming  the city. The government had spent the money on set setting up some galleries and sculptures in these years. It had given much many happy hours for to the people and some street sculptures on the streets can help get the city help city getting more and more beautiful. For example: the young people can go to the cinema to see the film when they finished finish their jobs; if you like drawing, you can go to art gallery to spend their your time; the elders can find new friends when they are singing or dancing.

The A person very happily for the goverment to claim their life quality A person can be very happy , although, the artistic project is based on the basic life. Many people still can not catch their basic life, eg: kids can not study; sickness can't get a good helpful cure; the singel single elderly persons are rising  is raising and so on.

As above mentioned, I just subject suggest the government pay attention to the balbance balance of the artistic & basic life. Let different people get their different required meet sb requirements, also let the city or town getting more beautiful.

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